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Me / Exemplars
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I wish, I wish that people would care more about nature. When I dream, I dream about my own beautiful arabian horse When I cry, I am crying about all the sadness in the world. When I laugh I am laughing at all the jokes I've been told. When I think, I think about everything under the stars. When I talk, I am saying my thoughts aloud. While I breathe I'm alive. While I'm alive, I'm me. (year 8) |
I like flowers and cats also I like houres I Like Reading riting playing I like school. I feel happy when Im at scool. (year 4) |
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think school is cool. I feel boured. I dream that I can met my great Grandad. I hope It dose not rain afterschoolall the time. (year 4) |
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never happy says my pappy I'm always sad says my dad I'm Just like tom says my mom but when I go into my room... I giggle, I laugh, I yell, I groom my cat who gets into a spat and thats me (year 4) |
I think eerting [exciting] things I feel goey things I dream special things And I hops rely good things (year 4) |
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I'm called Charuka, |
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feel happy when I get to see my friends, I feel happy when play video games, But I hate my world turing into a mess, because it gives me misery! (year 8) |
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old me up in a tree thinking about poor old me. mum call come and get a Ice cream. happy old me sitting in a tree (year 4) |
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think cool thoughts I feel awsome feelings I dream fantastic dreams I Hope wonderful things (year 8) |
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