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Santa / Exemplars
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| HIGH RANGE Year 8 | MID RANGE Year 8 | |
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Why did I take my shoes off a that house and forget them? |
Oh man I wish I didn't even get divorced with my wife cause I can't even walk and I'm really really hungry and theres no-one to do my work for me and thats to deliver the presents | |
| Those dam boots give me blisters the fake beard gives me a rash I only do it because it is the only time Mrs Claus lets me out the house. | I knew I should have stayed in that cosy aparment building insted of moving out here. | |
| I'm sick of running for those lazy reindeer. My feet keep getting chill-blanes. | I mite not give those peskey kids a present this time Becasue they dont putt out any thing for me, I'll see the Looks on there faces in the morning. | |
| Gee, falling off the roof into a frozen pool, slipping onto the snow, with a cold and a headache is great man! | Gee I wonder what I will get for christmas | |
| Oh what am i going to buy turara this X-mus. Some sock or Toilet paper. | ||
| thank god rest after a hard days work ! ! | ||
| I am afrad the kid will get know gift this year | ||
| HIGH RANGE Year 4 | MID RANGE Year 4 | |
| Why am I sitting here on christams day ....... on the bed. My feet are soggy and I need to go to the toilet. I'm too old! I'm 1065 you know! | what day is it. Pasint [present] time. heir I come anodes [adults]. | |
| Why did I have to land in the fire | I wonder what would happen if by mistake I mixed the present giving stuff & I gave all the good people coal & all of the bad people presents. | |
| Gee this is nice I'll stay in hear till Christmas and let all the elves do the work. | I want a peice of cake. | |
| What if I couldn't get my feet out of these buckets. | ||
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