Questions/instructions:

This activity uses the computer.
In this activity you are going to plan an interesting piece of writing. You will be doing it over three days.

Today, after watching a short video, you will have a few minutes to think about what you might write and put down some of your ideas. On the second day you will have time to write, and on the third day you will have some time to check your work and make any changes that you want. I will give you a booklet for writing in. Each day I will collect it back in, then give it back the next time you come.

DAY 1 INSTRUCTIONS (INTRO). 5 Minutes.
Today you are going to think about and plan what you will be writing.
We’ll start by watching a video which will help you get started. It shows some times that are special to people, and should help you start thinking about times that are special to you. Your writing is to describe a day you’ll never forget.
Click the A Day I’ll Never Forget button.

[video description: Series of 16 stills depicting a wide variety of scenes. No voiceover.]

Remember, you’re going to describe a day that was very special to you; a day you’ll never forget.
It should be true and not make-believe. On the first page of your booklet, write down some of the ideas that you might want to use. Don’t start writing the piece today. You can have 5 minutes to think about and plan your ideas.

Hand out booklets and blue pens. Allow 5 minutes then collect back the booklets.

DAY 2 INSTRUCTIONS (TEAM / INDEPENDENT). 20 minutes.
Yesterday you started to think about what you will be writing. It is about a time that is very special to you;
a day you’ll never forget. I’m going to give back your booklets and today you will have time to do your writing. You will have 20 minutes, and I’ll let you know when you have used half of the time, and when you have 5 minutes left.

If you don’t know how to spell some words you need, try to spell them as best you can without asking me or someone else. Use a PENCIL or BLUE PEN today.

Remember, what you write about should be true and not make-believe. It should describe the day you will never forget, so that when others read what you have written, they will know what happened on that day, and why it was special to you.

Hand out students’ booklets, pencils and blue pens. Tell the students when 10 minutes and then 5 minutes remain.

Collect booklets back at the end of the time.

DAY 3 INSTRUCTIONS (STATIONS). 10 minutes.
Yesterday you did some writing. Today you are to check it through very carefully and make any changes
or improvements that you think should be made.

Only use a RED pen today. Don’t use a rubber. If you want, you can also use a Spell Write.
You have 10 minutes for doing this.

Hand out booklets, red pens and Spell Writes. Allow 10 minutes then collect back booklets.

CONTENT:

Spelling Changes:
(including circling or underlining of words)

YEAR 4:      Exemplar 1 | Exemplar 2 | Exemplar 3

YEAR 8:      Exemplar 1 | Exemplar 2

YEAR 4:      Exemplar 1 | Exemplar 2 | Exemplar 3

YEAR 8:      Exemplar 1 | Exemplar 2