| YEAR
4 – HIGH RANGE: |
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tape and C.D player:
•
So I can listen to c.ds in my room.
• So I can dance in my room instead of in the living room.
• So if I want to [listen to] c.ds I don’t have to
go all the way downstairs to listen to it. |
A
new bicycle:
1. My old bike is getting to small.
2. I need a new one because I use my bike a lot and it is getting
worn out.
3. My old one’s wheels keep going down and I always have to
pump them up. |
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| YEAR
4 – MID RANGE: |
computer:
becaus I have not play on one for 3 years.cause I want one.I need
one for my homwork |
Trans-former:
1. You don’t know how much it means to me.
2. I have been wanting one for a long long long time.
3. Because they have cool colours and they can do more than 1 thing. |
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| YEAR
8 – HIGH RANGE: |
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The
internet:
“Can we get the internet. It has lots of good education
on it, you and dad can use it for school research. We can look
at our e-mails @ or [our] own house. We can talk to our friends
on MSN. All the familly will be careful not to give out our name
of address and we will not spend all day on it, so what do you
think,” I said hopefully
Mum replied… |
Trip
over seas:
Mum and Dad for my B Day I would really like a trip to Australia
to the Gold Coast. I could go see Haley and Kimberley. Me and Bevan
wouldn’t fight. Please! Please! You said you would always
try and take us over there before we moved out. I wouldn’t
spend much I promise. Please! Please! I won’t ask for anything
else. Please Mum and Dad Please! |
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| YEAR
8 – MID RANGE: |
Pogostick:
1. That I would have heaps of fun
2. I could keep it forever
3. I would enjoy it4. Me & my friend would have fun. (If my
friend came for the day or the night) |
A
Go-Pead:
1. Dear Mum and DadCould I please have a go-pead for my birthday.
I’ve been realy good.
2. Dear Mum and DadAll the people in my class have a go-pead why
cant I have one. PS Please can I have one.
3. Dear Mum and DadCould I please Have a go-pead for my birthday
I could get around faster. |
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