For
the majority of students in this study, growing written language
expertise was related to growing mastery and confidence in spoken
language. Writing accomplishment was to some degree linked to developing
spoken language skills. This is not to suggest that the relationship
between oral and written language is necessarily simple or direct
or that spoken language “maps” onto written language in any simple
or direct way. What was evident from this study was that the more
confident and competent writers in the study demonstrated knowledge
of specifically literate strategies and structures in their writing.
Students who were more skilled in handling the demands of oral language
also appeared more likely to demonstrate sophistication and maturity
in their writing. Less confident oral students also appeared not
to have such a repertoire of written forms and strategies to draw
upon. These students appeared unaware of the difference between
conversational exchanges and written language, and of the different
language strategies appropriate to each medium. They seemed unaware
of the fact that both speakers and writers must use the tools appropriate
to the medium to guide the reader's response. Information gathered
here suggests that that communicative competence continues to grow
and develop during the middle and late primary school years. While
knowledge of “taught” grammatical features related positively to
overall writing performance, the study could not determine the degree
to which increased writing competence is maturational as opposed
to being consequent on something that has been directly taught.
(Information gathered in this study was based on the assumption
that students would show, through task performance, what they were
able to do. There is however a need to distinguish between actual
performance and possible competence: some students may have been
nervous or disinclined to perform, for a host of reasons that this
study did not control for. Therefore their performance might not
reflect their competence in another context.)
While all of
the students in the sample had some degree of mastery over both
spoken and written forms, the degree of proficiency in their performances
varied greatly. Some students appeared to have an almost effortless
language fluency in both spoken and written forms whereas others
appeared to face obstacles of varying proportions, usually across
both domains. This study evidenced that the more confident and competent
writers demonstrated knowledge of specifically literate strategies
and structures in their writing. |
High
oral language performers engaged with and related well to both their
audience and their subject matter. They exploited the tools of oral
language to make their communication effective. Fluent speakers
were identified as those who used reasoning and justifications in
their responses. They used the tools of oral language to carry their
message. In the course of explaining their thoughts, these students
showed some evidence of a tolerance for ambiguity, a concession
that things might not be quite as they seem, and that they needed
to give evidence to support their views although, as was noted in
Section 2, the ability to weigh and communicate a fully developed
point of view was not identified as a strength at either year level.
Less competent speakers appeared not to have a sense of their audience's
needs. Their responses were brief and sometimes terse. A common
area for further development across both speaking and writing performances
could be to further develop skills of relating to the audience,
whether present or absent.
Students who
were more skilled in handling the demands of oral language also
appeared more likely to demonstrate sophistication and maturity
in their writing. Effective writing requires a whole raft of learned
skills. It is not simply speech written down. Yet many students,
even at Year 8, demonstrated that they were still learning what
speech and writing can and cannot do. Consequently, as we have seen,
there was sometimes a mismatch between oral and literate strategies
in their writing. As was shown in Section 3, some students appeared
to be directly importing patterns of oral language construction
into their written prose. Their writing relied heavily on techniques
such as reiteration, repetition, and multiple clauses linked by
conjunctions. Connective words such as “and”, “then”, “so”, “but”,
“next”, “later” were over-used. Overall these students appeared
to be writing without anticipating the effects of their writing
choices on their readers.
By contrast,
more practiced writers showed they could shape and craft their writing
with an overall sense of purpose, and yet without having to include
every last detail. This group of students were starting to choose
grammatical structures to carry the weight and impact of their ideas.
They were able to link sentences and connect related ideas. Their
writing had a distinctively personal voice. Overall these findings
underline reasons for the very real challenge that writing represents
for some students, for without a sense of the fundamental difference
between speech and writing, and the different skills that each of
these requires, some writers struggled to make their writing engaging.
They appeared not to have a repertoire of writing strategies to
draw upon. Possible reasons for this are many. While some of these
“literate” skills and strategies may have been learned through direct
teacher instruction, overall experience with written language in
a range of contexts, including reading, is likely to play a part
in the development of student overall language expertise.
High-performing
students at both year levels showed evidence in their writing of
linguistic constructions not found in spontaneous speech (though
sometimes used in more formal speech situations). This suggests
that there are important influences on these children's writing
development other than oral language. It is probable that reading
is the most likely source of these more complex linguistic constructions.
It would seem likely that the more children read material that is
enjoyable, complex and thoughtful in construction, the greater the
chance becomes that these structures will start to appear in their
own writing. Perera (1984, p. 244) notes that the linguistic patterns
that are characteristic of written language are simply not to be
found in spontaneous oral forms: |